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  • #61
    Originally posted by riojako View Post
    How do you guys feel about these kinds of shots?[ATTACH=CONFIG]23841[/ATTACH]
    Might work with more DOF, better cropping, and brightening.

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    • #62
      Hows this?Click image for larger version

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      • #63
        Originally posted by riojako View Post
        Hows this?[ATTACH=CONFIG]23844[/ATTACH]
        Cropping worse on this one, imho.

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        • #64
          How would you crop this? I'm lost..

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          • #65
            Originally posted by riojako View Post
            How would you crop this? I'm lost..
            Not so tight on the top and right. You're cutting the nose art and part of the canon itself. Moot point really though, since the low DOF would still kill it for me personally.

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            • #66
              I have a different one here. Just took this today. Click image for larger version

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              • #67
                Originally posted by riojako View Post
                I have a different one here. Just took this today. [ATTACH=CONFIG]23873[/ATTACH]
                This image is blurry, noisy, and dirty. Any particular reason why you shot at F/13 and ISO1600?

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                • #68
                  I was shooting with an 80-400mm lens. I had to pump my ISO up to keep my shutter speed higher than my focal length because the image stabilization on my lens is not adequate. I've found that most of my images are sharper when I shoot them at a higher aperture too.

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                  • #69
                    I have another one here. Please take a look. I feel good about this one.Click image for larger version

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                    • #70
                      Originally posted by riojako View Post
                      I have another one here. Please take a look. I feel good about this one.[ATTACH=CONFIG]23909[/ATTACH]
                      Dark, and light editing halos & vignetting. Otherwise ok.

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                      • #71
                        Brightened the exposure a little bit here and I tried to get rid of the vignetting as best I could. Let me know what you think. Click image for larger version

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                        • #72
                          Originally posted by riojako View Post
                          Brightened the exposure a little bit here and I tried to get rid of the vignetting as best I could. Let me know what you think. [ATTACH=CONFIG]23932[/ATTACH]
                          Vignetting and halos still present.

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                          • #73
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ID:	1034702The dark area in the lower left hand corner is part of the cloud. I do not believe its vignetting. I've re-edited this one some more.

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                            • #74
                              Originally posted by riojako View Post
                              [ATTACH=CONFIG]23958[/ATTACH]The dark area in the lower left hand corner is part of the cloud. I do not believe its vignetting. I've re-edited this one some more.
                              Lower right hand corner is equally dark, while the lower-middle edge is not. This is vignetting. Light editing halos around main gear still visible.

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                              • #75
                                How about this one?Click image for larger version

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