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    Here's another one of the polish Dreamliner. I feel good about this one.
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    Quote Originally Posted by riojako View Post
    Here's another one of the polish Dreamliner. I feel good about this one.
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    Would be rejected for Too Far/Centering. Needs a tighter crop.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dlowwa View Post
    Would be rejected for Too Far/Centering. Needs a tighter crop.
    Hows this?
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    Default Prescreening request/ editing advice.

    Took this shot of an Air Bridge Cargo 747-400F. Id like to get some feedback on it. Click image for larger version. 

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    Quote Originally Posted by riojako View Post
    Took this shot of an Air Bridge Cargo 747-400F. Id like to get some feedback on it. Click image for larger version. 

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    A bit too soft and high in the frame. Borderline backlit as well, so dark/contrast rejection quite possible. Editing halos and and dust spots visible as well.

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    I cant tell if this one has a vignette around it or not. Take a look and let me know what you guys think of everything else too.Click image for larger version. 

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    Quote Originally Posted by riojako View Post
    I cant tell if this one has a vignette around it or not. Take a look and let me know what you guys think of everything else too.Click image for larger version. 

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    Little bit of vignetting in the top left corner, but nothing that would cause a rejection I think. Image is soft and dark overall, however.

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    ill edit it and resubmit it here to get some feedback when im done.

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    Hows this?Click image for larger version. 

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    Quote Originally Posted by riojako View Post
    Hows this?Click image for larger version. 

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    Soft, dark, dirty, too high in frame.

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    Thank you for taking the time to look at these. I have another one here for you. Click image for larger version. 

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    Quote Originally Posted by riojako View Post
    Thank you for taking the time to look at these. I have another one here for you. Click image for larger version. 

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    Editing halos visible. Otherwise ok.

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    Prescreening request and editing advice. Click image for larger version. 

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    Quote Originally Posted by riojako View Post
    Prescreening request and editing advice. Click image for larger version. 

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    Would be rejected for dirty and possibly overprocessed. Was any filter applied to the image?

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    No filter was applied. I just used the dehaze slider in lightroom. Any suggestions on how to make this look better?

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    Quote Originally Posted by riojako View Post
    No filter was applied. I just used the dehaze slider in lightroom.
    That is a type of filter

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    Any suggestions on how to make this look better?
    Remove the dust spot(s) and don't use the dehaze slider.

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    Take a look at this and let me know what you think.Click image for larger version. 

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    Quote Originally Posted by riojako View Post
    Take a look at this and let me know what you think.Click image for larger version. 

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    Soft, but otherwise ok.

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    Thanks for taking the time to look at these. I really value your advice. What could make the light look "harder" ?

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    Quote Originally Posted by riojako View Post
    What could make the light look "harder" ?
    What do you mean exactly?

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