G Del - Prescreening/editing advice

[G Del]

Hi there,

I am quite new to the whole editing/uploading photo thing - it would be much appreciated if someone could give me some feedback one the image below (I have already uploaded some before discovering this forum, so will wait to ask about those until after they are screened):
Thanks in advance!

[dlowwa]

Hi there,

I am quite new to the whole editing/uploading photo thing - it would be much appreciated if someone could give me some feedback one the image below (I have already uploaded some before discovering this forum, so will wait to ask about those until after they are screened):
Thanks in advance!
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Hi,

This would be rejected for softness, compression, and the poor crop on the right side.