wesbowers - pre screening advice

[wesbowers]

I would appreciate it if someone could pre-screen this. I'm new here, what am I doing wrong?

[derizu]

Crop is too wide and the aircraft is a little bit high in the frame. Underexposed as well. Some vignetting is apparent in the corners, however, as you fix the crop they will be less apparent. A 16:9 crop ratio may be more beneficial for getting rid of the vignetting as it takes even more of the far corners out. Sharpening looks okay to me, just remember to sharpen as needed when fixing the crop. Anyone else who sees this feel free to add on! Good luck to you on your first accepted photo in the future!

[dlowwa]

I would appreciate it if someone could pre-screen this. I'm new here, what am I doing wrong?

Tighter crop and better centering needed. Until that is done, can't really comment much more on the quality.