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  • Hi,

    Could I ask how this one would do please? I always thought the fuselage should be positioned equally between the top and bottom of the frame, though wasn't sure what the rule was for allowing the tail, and if this was perhaps considered too much dead space.

    Thank you for the help!


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    • Originally posted by KyleMcKinlay View Post
      Hi,

      Could I ask how this one would do please? I always thought the fuselage should be positioned equally between the top and bottom of the frame, though wasn't sure what the rule was for allowing the tail, and if this was perhaps considered too much dead space.

      Thank you for the help!

      Not a crew, in this case center using fuselage too.

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      • Originally posted by KyleMcKinlay View Post
        Hi,

        Could I ask how this one would do please? I always thought the fuselage should be positioned equally between the top and bottom of the frame, though wasn't sure what the rule was for allowing the tail, and if this was perhaps considered too much dead space.
        Centering is fine.

        Originally posted by Calvin L View Post

        Not a crew, in this case center using fuselage too.
        That would be incorrect.

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        • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post


          That would be incorrect.
          Looks like I'm wrong this time

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          • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

            Centering is fine.



            That would be incorrect.
            Thank you very much for the feedback, as always!

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            • Hi, can I ask how this one would do please? Thank you!

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              • Originally posted by KyleMcKinlay View Post
                Hi, can I ask how this one would do please? Thank you!
                Borderline oversharpened

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                • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

                  Borderline oversharpened
                  Thank you for the feedback, I’ll reduce the sharpening on it.

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                  • Could I ask for feedback on this one please? The colours seemed a little off at first.

                    Thank you!
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                    • Originally posted by KyleMcKinlay View Post
                      Could I ask for feedback on this one please? The colours seemed a little off at first.

                      Thank you!
                      Color seems fine. Borderline heat hazed.

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                      • Thank you for the previous feedback!

                        Could I ask for a little guidance on silhouettes please? I've adjusted the levels such that there's no major clipping of the whites in the sun. The main thing I'm a little unsure of is the brighter section of the aircraft at the nose and if this should be should be the same tone as the rest of the aircraft.

                        Thank you again!
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                        • Originally posted by KyleMcKinlay View Post
                          Thank you for the previous feedback!

                          Could I ask for a little guidance on silhouettes please? I've adjusted the levels such that there's no major clipping of the whites in the sun. The main thing I'm a little unsure of is the brighter section of the aircraft at the nose and if this should be should be the same tone as the rest of the aircraft.

                          Thank you again!
                          Would likely be an overexposed rejection, regardless of whether the histogram technically shows it as such or not. Sun/glare too distracting.

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                          • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

                            Would likely be an overexposed rejection, regardless of whether the histogram technically shows it as such or not. Sun/glare too distracting.
                            Thank you for the feedback. Is there any chance for an earlier frame, where this is isn't as strong?

                            Thanks again!
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                            • Originally posted by KyleMcKinlay View Post

                              Thank you for the feedback. Is there any chance for an earlier frame, where this is isn't as strong?

                              Thanks again!
                              Don't think there's a significant difference between the two.

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                              • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

                                Don't think there's a significant difference between the two.
                                That's a pity. Thank you for your opinion. For future reference, is the effect of glare mostly where the aircraft silhouette is not fully black, but rather lighter towards the nose?

                                Thanks again!

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