Olivier Landes. editing Advice

[olandes269]

thank you Vinicius Dana

[olandes269]

Hello JP crew, for corrections please

[dlowwa]

Hello JP crew, for corrections please

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Would be rejected for overprocessed/manipulation. Please don't apply such filters to the sky.

[olandes269]

Thank you dana, and news pictures for corrections

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Olivier

[dlowwa]

Thank you dana, and news pictures for corrections

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Olivier

1. borderline contrast/horizon
2. borderline contrast
3-4 soft, horizon
5. contrast

[olandes269]

Thank Dana for your answer.

how can I repare? by adding exposure and contrast?

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6807256

Best regards

Olivier

[dlowwa]

Thank Dana for your answer.

how can I repare? by adding exposure and contrast?

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6807256

Best regards

Olivier

Contrast is too low.

[olandes269]

[QUOTE = dlowwa; 671145] Le contraste est trop faible. [/ QUOTE]

After correction it's better or not?


Thank you

[dlowwa]

[QUOTE = dlowwa; 671145] Le contraste est trop faible. [/ QUOTE]

After correction it's better or not?
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Thank you

Bit too dark now.

[olandes269]

Bit too dark now.

Ok thank, new correction with more expo



blue on blue, hard hard!!!!!!!

[dlowwa]

Ok thank, new correction with more expo

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blue on blue, hard hard!!!!!!!

It's not the blue that's the issue, it's the shadows on the underside of the aircraft. They are either too strong, or washed out. Latest is better, but still borderline.

[olandes269]

It's not the blue that's the issue, it's the shadows on the underside of the aircraft. They are either too strong, or washed out. Latest is better, but still borderline.

Thank you, I dimmed the shadows



See you soon

Olivier

[dlowwa]

Thank you, I dimmed the shadows

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See you soon

Olivier

In this case the shadows were already too weak, so making the weaker is counterproductive.

[olandes269]

[QUOTE = dlowwa; 671200] Dans ce cas, les ombres étaient déjà trop faibles, ce qui rend le plus faible est contre-productif. [/ QUOTE]


Thank Dana for your patience!!!! new correction

[dlowwa]

[QUOTE = dlowwa; 671200] Dans ce cas, les ombres étaient déjà trop faibles, ce qui rend le plus faible est contre-productif. [/ QUOTE]


Thank Dana for your patience!!!! new correction

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Better, but still borderline as it's a bit harsh now.