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[Alex - Spot-This !]

Wallace,
Your shot will indeed result in a motiv rejection I'm afraid.
Cheers
Alex

[royisher]

Hey,

Could anyone please tell me what about this 2?

Thanks!





Royi

[Alex - Spot-This !]

Hi Royi,
Those 2 pics appear to be soft and lack contrast for me. But you can probably work them (specially the 1st one) on PS. I would also try to focus more on the plane on the 1st pic with a better crop (too much dead space on the right side). The weather really looks like you had a hard time not getting totally wet...
Cheers
Alex

[royisher]

Hey Alex,

Thanks for the reply. Indeed I did some fast work on those 2, I thought that if I would show the fire truck on the 1st pic it would be nice, but you're basiclly right, I will re-edit that one and upload it here and ask for opinion once again.

Thanks.
ROyi

[Alex - Spot-This !]

Royi,
Showing the truck is ok, I said on the right side, the plane doesn't need to be 100%centered for a motiv like this one.
Cheers

[royisher]

Hey again,

What about this one now -



Thanks!
Royi

[Gimli Glider]

Hi -

How about this one?

[LX-A343]

I would upload it.

Cheers

[MaxPower]

I'm not sure about this one. The motive/crop is the one that makes me hesitate to upload it.

Do you got an opinion, What do you think, Gerardo ?

[philh]

Are these too dark? I`m undecided. It was one of those days when it is bright sunshine one minute then the darkest, thickest clouds ever the next minute, and these were taken during the latter!

http://www.jetphotos.net/viewqueued_b.php?id=1286201

http://www.jetphotos.net/viewqueued_b.php?id=1286209

[Alex - Spot-This !]

They look ok to me Phil
Alex

[LX-A343]

I'm not sure about this one. The motive/crop is the one that makes me hesitate to upload it.

Do you got an opinion, What do you think, Gerardo ?

The motive/cropping/framing is indeed a bit weird. I don't exactly see, what you intend to show. The engine draws some attention, but then again it's "lost in (too much dead) space", so to say. I would try something different.

[jid]

Are these too dark? I`m undecided. It was one of those days when it is bright sunshine one minute then the darkest, thickest clouds ever the next minute, and these were taken during the latter!

http://www.jetphotos.net/viewqueued_b.php?id=1286201

http://www.jetphotos.net/viewqueued_b.php?id=1286209

Hi Phil the exposure seems fine on both, however they both have jaggies, the Varig being the worst.

Jid

[MaxPower]

Unmarked MD80

The motive/cropping/framing is indeed a bit weird. I don't exactly see, what you intend to show. The engine draws some attention, but then again it's "lost in (too much dead) space", so to say. I would try something different.

Roger that.

However I am trying to show an anonymous MD, waiting for a paintjob, probably !

I'll go back down there and catch her on a different angle. Thanks.


JPS

[philh]

Thanks for the feedback chaps.