YanS - Editing Advice

[dlowwa]

Hello everyone,

I tried to brighten the Dornier up a bitbut I'm not sure if it is good enough now. it would be awsome to know if this version has better chances.



In addition to that I also have this CRJ in similar light-conditions so I assume this needs 'night shot' aswell, correct? I'm also unsure if its too dark or too soft.

Thanks for your answers,
Best regards,
Yannick

Both are a bit soft (especially the second), but would otherwise be ok for me. Night shot can be used for both.

[YanS]

Hey dlowwa,

Thanks a lot for your feedback .
I gave the ADAC a touch more sharpness and put it in the queue.

Best regards,
Yannick

[YanS]

Hello everyone,

A feedback on this picture would be great. I'm a little worried about heat haze / softness and horizon on this one .


Thanks in advance,
All the best,
Yannick

[LX-A343]

Hello everyone,

A feedback on this picture would be great. I'm a little worried about heat haze / softness and horizon on this one .


Thanks in advance,
All the best,
Yannick

Indeed: soft, slightly heat hazed and slightly leaning to the right

[YanS]

Hello everybody,

As the last version of this picture had too noticable issues with softness and exposure as well, I now tried a slightly wider crop and a lower resolution. Does this hide the softness enough?
Of course a feedback concerning the exposure-problem or other flaws is welcome as well.



Thanks in advance,
Best regards,
Yannick

[dlowwa]

Hello everybody,

As the last version of this picture had too noticable issues with softness and exposure as well, I now tried a slightly wider crop and a lower resolution. Does this hide the softness enough?
Of course a feedback concerning the exposure-problem or other flaws is welcome as well.



Thanks in advance,
Best regards,
Yannick

Exposure ok, tail is a bit soft.

[YanS]

Hello everyone,

I am not sure about the horizon on this one. I used the pole that holds captain-side main gear as a reference but I'm not sure if that works for this shot. A feedback concerning other possible issues is also welcome of course . Would this one need the 'vintage/warbird'-category?



Thanks for your answers,
best regards,
Yannick

[LX-A343]

Hello everyone,

I am not sure about the horizon on this one. I used the pole that holds captain-side main gear as a reference but I'm not sure if that works for this shot. A feedback concerning other possible issues is also welcome of course . Would this one need the 'vintage/warbird'-category?



Thanks for your answers,
best regards,
Yannick

try to use a vertical in the centre of the photo as reference. The photo is slightly leaning to the right.

[YanS]

Hello everyone,

I'm also not sure about the horizon on these pictures, so a feedback on the horizon as well as other possible problems would be great. I also realized that nearly all of my photos seem to be at least borderline soft, so a look on that might be helpful.
Furthermore I'm almost sure that the business jet in the foreground of the D-ATCG is a problem but I tought it might be worth asking for that here in the forum.

1.

2.

3.

4.


Thanks a lot for your answers,
Best regards,
Yannick

[dlowwa]

Hello everyone,

I'm also not sure about the horizon on these pictures, so a feedback on the horizon as well as other possible problems would be great. I also realized that nearly all of my photos seem to be at least borderline soft, so a look on that might be helpful.
Furthermore I'm almost sure that the business jet in the foreground of the D-ATCG is a problem but I tought it might be worth asking for that here in the forum.

1.

2.

3.

4.


Thanks a lot for your answers,
Best regards,
Yannick

Horizon looks ok to me for these. Yes, foreground distracting on 3, but not sure would be immediate rejection.

[YanS]

Hey dlowwa,

Thanks for your answer .
I decided to give #3 a chance, worst thing that can happen is a rejection ...

All the best
Yannick

[YanS]

Hello everyone,

a feedback on these would be great.

1. Does the crop work here?


2.






Thanks for your answers,
Best regards,
Yannick

[YanS]

Hey again,

I forgot this one on my last post. A feedback on this would be nice as well.
This was taken through glass. Does that cause any problems with colour etc here?


Thanks a lot,
Kind regards,
Yannick

[dlowwa]

Hey again,

I forgot this one on my last post. A feedback on this would be nice as well.
This was taken through glass. Does that cause any problems with colour etc here?


Thanks a lot,
Kind regards,
Yannick

1 & 3. ok for me
2. soft/blurry

[LX-A343]

Hello everyone,

a feedback on these would be great.

1. Does the crop work here?


2.






Thanks for your answers,
Best regards,
Yannick

1) a bit harsh contrast
2) soft, noise, aircraft slightly too high in the frame