Bapt0708: Pre-screening/How to do a better editing ?

[dlowwa]

Normally this is better.
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Unsharpened a little bit.
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1. horizon ok, but too low in the frame now
2. borderline oversharpened

Last time to comment on these.

[bapt0708]

Normally this is better.

Unsharpened a little bit.

[dlowwa]

Reworked the 777.
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Reworked the 737 from a previous version.
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Last question, how can you see that a photo need a rotation ? I aligned the 777 with the ground before, and it was not good.

1. needs CW rotation. all background vertical references are leaning left.
2. borderline oversharpened

[bapt0708]

Reworked the 777.

Reworked the 737 from a previous version.

Last question, how can you see that a photo need a rotation ? I aligned the 777 with the ground before, and it was not good.

[dlowwa]

I lined up the photos with the building is it better ?
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Removed the birds and added sharpening.
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1. still needs CW. also soft in spots
2. oversharpened now

[bapt0708]

I lined up the photos with the building is it better ?

Removed the birds and added sharpening.

[dlowwa]

I reworked all of them.
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I removed some birds.
What are you saying by horizon ?

1. ok
2. needs CW rotation
3. still soft towards nose & birds

[bapt0708]

I reworked all of them.



I removed some birds.
What are you saying by horizon ?

[dlowwa]

No problem, your help is really appreciated.

May i have a pre-screening please.
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Thank you.

1. soft
2. borderline soft/horizon
3. soft, overprocessed

Don't see any dust spots, but the birds would be better off removed since some could consider them dirt.

[bapt0708]

No problem, your help is really appreciated.

May i have a pre-screening please.



Thank you.

[dlowwa]

Reworked it.
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I still can't see anything, but i passed the corrector below the tail.

Overprocessed/manipulation for bad edit/dust removal below tail, and oversharpened. Not going to comment on this image any more.

[bapt0708]

Reworked it.

I still can't see anything, but i passed the corrector below the tail.

[dlowwa]

Reworked it, is it better ? I didn't see any more dust spots where are they ?
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Soft, and at least one dust spot below tail.

[bapt0708]

Reworked it, is it better ? I didn't see any more dust spots where are they ?

[dlowwa]

Is it better now ?
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Oversharpened and dust spots.