Olivier Landes. editing Advice

[vcruvinel]

Thank Vinicius,

that's what I thought yet she was denied for lack of sharpening, hard hard!!!!!!!

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6625996

just as this one refused yesterday, I even took care to take another point of view!

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6624862

here why not we can find the tail blurred, I can possibly agree!

regards

Olivier

Olivier,

In the first one I can not see soft parts. IMHO is ok, so it's better wait some comments from the JP crew.

About the second I agree that the tail is blurried. See the word in the tail and also the top of the tail (soft area).

Hope this helps.

Cheers,

Vinicius

[olandes269]

Thank Vinicius,

that's what I thought yet she was denied for lack of sharpening, hard hard!!!!!!!

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6625996

just as this one refused yesterday, I even took care to take another point of view!

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6624862

here why not we can find the tail blurred, I can possibly agree!

regards

Olivier

[vcruvinel]

Hello JP crew and Vinicius,

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What do you think?

Olivier

Hi Olivier!

IMHO the photos looks good.

Cheers!

Vinicius

[olandes269]

Hello JP crew and Vinicius,



What do you think?

Olivier

[olandes269]

Thank Vinicius

See you soon

Olivier

[vcruvinel]

Hello the friends!!!

Is it annoying that the train is cut?

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Olivier

Nice motive, maybe the cut gears are not a problem...But I think the photo needs a bit more contrast.

Cheers,

Vinicius

[olandes269]

Hello the friends!!!

Is it annoying that the train is cut?



Olivier

[Alex - Spot-This !]

Not a huge fan of the overall balance but yes, acceptable I think

[Julian S.]

Hello,

what do you think of reframing this photo?

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Olivier

Can not speak for all, but it seems to be OK for me.

[vcruvinel]

Hello,

what do you think of reframing this photo?

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Olivier

Hi Olivier!

The wheels are soft and suffers a bit from heat haze. A bit more contrast will be good too.

Cheers,

Vinicius

[olandes269]

Hello,

what do you think of reframing this photo?



Olivier

[olandes269]

Oups, sorry sorry for the halo.

yet I always pay attention to that and It escaped me, it seemed to me that there was none while there is ugly! .

Thank you Dana

[dlowwa]

Hello JP crew,

don't understand this decision

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6589659

natural condition, natural color. I just cleared it up. Excessive authority over this picture and very severe rejection

Olivier

Contrast is too low, and there is a circular halo/banding in the sky.

[olandes269]

Hello JP crew,

don't understand this decision

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6589659

natural condition, natural color. I just cleared it up. Excessive authority over this picture and very severe rejection

Olivier

[dlowwa]

Hello JP crew, Vinicius, Cristian,

Just to confirm,

1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]16237[/ATTACH] hum, it seems to me that I have heat distorsion

2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]16238[/ATTACH]

See you soon

Olivier

1. quality ok, bird/dirt next to tail
2. yes, heat haze