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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
    Hello JP Crew,

    It had been a while since I had not been to the forum.

    I post you some photo for correction.

    1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]14858[/ATTACH] what should I do to improve. Photo taken at dawn

    2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]14859[/ATTACH]

    3 [ATTACH=CONFIG]14860[/ATTACH] must it refocus at the expense of the control tower

    4 [ATTACH=CONFIG]14861[/ATTACH]

    See you soon

    Olivier
    1. soft, borderline contrast
    2. I see what you're trying to do, but probably a little too much space between the two aircraft
    3. ok
    4. borderline crop/cut off

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  • olandes269
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    Hello JP Crew,

    It had been a while since I had not been to the forum.

    I post you some photo for correction.

    1 Click image for larger version

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    See you soon

    Olivier

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  • Julian S.
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    Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
    Hello JP Crew,

    Why? [ATTACH=CONFIG]14529[/ATTACH]

    other photo like this one are accepted. What should I have done to make it accepted

    Olivier
    Hi,

    there is too much dead space underneath the plane. Look, i have some examples of acceptable crops for you:
    https://www.jetphotos.com/photo/8717501
    https://www.jetphotos.com/photo/8686615
    https://www.jetphotos.com/photo/8564268
    https://www.jetphotos.com/photo/8297242
    The distace between the front gear and the lower edge and the tail and the upper edge are the same. The pictures looks centered.

    Have a nice weekend!
    Last edited by Julian S.; 2018-03-23, 21:46.

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  • olandes269
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    Hello JP Crew,

    Why? Click image for larger version

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    other photo like this one are accepted. What should I have done to make it accepted

    Olivier

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  • Alex - Spot-This !
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    1) borderline contrast
    2) ok
    3) ok (but if it's twice the DL 767 you need to choose one one of the 2 to upload
    4) soft and borderline contrast
    5) poor contrast

    Salutations
    Alex

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  • olandes269
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    for correction, please

    Olivier

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  • olandes269
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    Thank Julian.

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    See you soon

    Olivier

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  • Julian S.
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    Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
    Hello JP Crew,

    Wht's the categorie for this photo?

    JetPhotos.com is the biggest database of aviation photographs with over 5 million screened photos online!


    Thank you

    Olivier
    Business Jet

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  • olandes269
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    Hello JP Crew,

    Wht's the categorie for this photo?

    JetPhotos.com is the biggest database of aviation photographs with over 5 million screened photos online!


    Thank you

    Olivier

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
    Hello to all and JP Crew,

    New pictures for correction please

    1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]14399[/ATTACH]

    2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]14400[/ATTACH]

    3 [ATTACH=CONFIG]14401[/ATTACH]

    4 [ATTACH=CONFIG]14402[/ATTACH]

    5 [ATTACH=CONFIG]14403[/ATTACH]

    Thank you

    Olivier
    1. dirty, backlit, though not everyone will find the latter an issue for such a type of shot
    2. dirty
    3-4 similar
    5. dirty, soft, horizon

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  • olandes269
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    Hello to all and JP Crew,

    New pictures for correction please

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    Thank you

    Olivier

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  • LX-A343
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    Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
    For the ANA at first rejection, why am I told that it is undersharpened. Especially since I hardly touch the sharpening

    For Europa, for Dana is OK .

    We do not know which way to dance !!!!!
    You have to accept, that photography is not an exact science and has his grey areas. What looks (borderline) acceptable to one viewer looks (borderline) rejectable to another. That's why we give advices here, but without acceptance guarantees. Shouting at us won't make it any better.

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  • vcruvinel
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    Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
    Hello Jp team,

    Today with of funny color on LFPG, Can be guided to me on these photos, please.

    1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]10886[/ATTACH]

    2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]10887[/ATTACH]

    3 [ATTACH=CONFIG]10888[/ATTACH]

    4 [ATTACH=CONFIG]10889[/ATTACH] or 5 [ATTACH=CONFIG]10892[/ATTACH]

    Thank you

    Olivier
    Not a screener too, but hope my comments help.

    1. lacks contrast
    2. bad cropping
    3. needs a little CCW rotation
    4. soft and also blurry
    5. soft, blurry, contrast

    Best Regards,

    Vinicius Cruvinel

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  • Riadh
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    Hi, I am not a screener but would like to help. 2 tail parts are cut, unfortunately , 4 and 5 are soft/blurry, hope this helps.
    R

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  • olandes269
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    For the ANA at first rejection, why am I told that it is undersharpened. Especially since I hardly touch the sharpening

    For Europa, for Dana is OK .

    We do not know which way to dance !!!!!

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